I didn't change anything. All of the feedback was beneficial and aligned with the problem I was trying to validate. This experience was very insightful into people's real world problems.
Thanks for sharing this video and your blog. I enjoyed watching your video and hearing your elevator pitch, however I wish you would have included more written content in this post explaining what feedback you received last time, what you changed, and why. Here is the link to my elevator pitch and blog, you should definitely check it out when you get the opportunity! http://ent3003nicole.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey Drew! I loved your pitch and your idea a lot! I am currently in the midst of planning a huge trip for spring break, and it is stressful. I feel like this app would have helped me a ton. As far as your pitch, you talked really slow and clearly and that is definitely helpful for your audience. I understood everything and I am convinced this is a great app! Here's the link to my own post: http://ckm-ent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/week-7-elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Both your idea and your composure doing your pitch were extremely good! You were very confident in your idea and I can totally envision an app like this being successful. I would recommend for your next pitch to try using a larger space and possibly include more of your body in the video. Otherwise, I am very curious to see if your app or another similar one becomes popular over the next few years. Keep it up! Check out my post if you have the time: http://josetheentrepreneur.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
During your pitch, you spoke very clearly and were early to follow. Your idea has some potential, but with so many trade agents and travel apps/websites in the market, this product would face very tough competition. I think it would be great if you just lengthened the pitch a little bit and explained how this app would be different from other apps available right now and how it would attract customers over traditional travel agents. Check out my pitch here: http://thomasmurphy-ent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hi Drew!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing this video and your blog. I enjoyed watching your video and hearing your elevator pitch, however I wish you would have included more written content in this post explaining what feedback you received last time, what you changed, and why. Here is the link to my elevator pitch and blog, you should definitely check it out when you get the opportunity!
http://ent3003nicole.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey Drew!
ReplyDeleteI loved your pitch and your idea a lot! I am currently in the midst of planning a huge trip for spring break, and it is stressful. I feel like this app would have helped me a ton. As far as your pitch, you talked really slow and clearly and that is definitely helpful for your audience. I understood everything and I am convinced this is a great app!
Here's the link to my own post: http://ckm-ent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/week-7-elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey Drew,
ReplyDeleteBoth your idea and your composure doing your pitch were extremely good! You were very confident in your idea and I can totally envision an app like this being successful. I would recommend for your next pitch to try using a larger space and possibly include more of your body in the video. Otherwise, I am very curious to see if your app or another similar one becomes popular over the next few years. Keep it up! Check out my post if you have the time: http://josetheentrepreneur.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html
Hey Drew,
ReplyDeleteDuring your pitch, you spoke very clearly and were early to follow. Your idea has some potential, but with so many trade agents and travel apps/websites in the market, this product would face very tough competition. I think it would be great if you just lengthened the pitch a little bit and explained how this app would be different from other apps available right now and how it would attract customers over traditional travel agents. Check out my pitch here: http://thomasmurphy-ent3003.blogspot.com/2016/02/elevator-pitch-no-2.html